My first EVER track.

to teach you stuff here are some suggestions:

Have a short finish line
Use a wide range in clipart
Dont edit the movie when your filming
dont have a load of random breakable lines that dont make sense (make them into a picture)
never ever put clip art on a trapdoor line (unless its floating) at the start you had a floating tree...
balance out all manuals
put manuals in it
scene all of it
make your own clipart
put a wide range of clipart, nose manuals, tail manuals, nose hangs, scenery, tricks and triggers
put tricks in it
dont repeat parts of the track (just a tip)
use trigger zoom lines
have short trampoline lines
Zoom in
erase any parts of lines you dont need
make them longer
dont have breakable lines which dont break / which the rider doesnt ride over
have short breakable lines (optianal)
dont rely on clipart alone
and obey all these!

i guess it could need improving...